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Americas Golden Girl

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America’s Golden Girl
Imagine taking one step into a chlorine-filled arena. The humid air rushes onto your skin. An immense smile spreads across your face. This is because you know everything is about to change. In less than 24 hours you will be holding a glistening gold medal in your hand, standing up on the podium while the Star Spangled Banner blares for the whole world to hear and tears will stream down your face. Taking one look back at your coach, Teri McKeever, you realize if it wasn’t for her you would not be here. Graciously, you run up, swing your arms around her body, and embrace her in a powerful hug that says it all. Swimming is a very intense sport and consumes every second of a swimmer’s free time. However, putting in hundreds …show more content…

The author Michael Silver, along with Natalie Coughlin, did an astounding job using descriptive and informative writing to explain how Coughlin was able to, in their words, “fight back challenged conventional wisdom and become …show more content…

For instance, “The Aussies won another gold and, with a time of 3:57.32, set another world record. The United States (3:59.12) edged Germany (4:00.72) for second, making Coughlin’s final medal tally two golds, two silvers, and a bronze.” The quote presented in the text shows how when writing this, Coughlin and Silver decided to put everyone’s time in here. This happened at various times throughout the book. Not only would the reader receive Coughlin’s times, but also her competitor’s times as well. Knowing others’ times make it more of a real experience and allow the reader to feel like they are standing on deck with Natalie and her coach, McKeever. Also, the book states, “In the end, Emily had chosen Cal over Arizona, and Helen felt the Bears could validate that decision by prevailing.” This quote along with the quote “So Crossen called Amano, asked if she’d made a decision and nearly dropped the phone when she answered, ‘Yes. I think I’m coming to Cal.’” allows the reader to have an insight on some of Coughlin’s teammates. It’s important for the reader to be informed on how Natalie’s fellow swimmers became recruited because each one of the swimmers in the book both benefitted and interacted with Coughlin. Each one of them played a role in Natalie’s life and that is why the authors informed the reader of how her teammates were recruited. The book also explains some of their personal lives

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