This semester in Expository Writing class, I learned ways that can make my writing precise and professional looking. Specifically, I learned to revise my writing by using two skills of RADAR revision: deleting and reading, and I demonstrated my understanding of these skills in personal statement number 1 and 2.
The first skill I used is reordering. Using this skill I made my sentences more logical and made sure they flow well. In the draft of personal statement 11 I wrote, “I used to hear this phrase a lot in my childhood and, therefore, I wanted to experience it and for me experiencing it means growing up”. When I revised I changed my sentence to read, “I always used to hear this phrase “ stepping into real life”. Thus , I wanted to experience it and for me experiencing it means growing up”. This revision improved my personal statement because when I reordered my sentences, it made my writing precise and made more sense. In the sentence quoted above, I reordered three sentences into two. I introduced my phrase “stepping into real life”
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After using this skill I removed ideas which were unrelated, sentences that didn’t make sense and ideas that were repetitive. In the draft of the second personal statement I wrote, “She works hard and devotes her time as much as she can to work and support me and my brother financially. She also takes care of all the house chores from buying groceries to paying all the bills on time and cooking healthy food for us”. When I revised I changed my sentence to read, “My mother works hard and devotes her time as much as she can to work and support me and my brother”. This revision of deleting improved my personal statement by making it more precise and to the point.
This semester, I have improved my writing by using two skills: deleting and reordering. These skills are going to help me in the future as a writer by making my writing easy to read and interesting for the
While attending writing class, I learned about the 4 steps in writing, bases for revising, organizing, and connecting specific information, and I also learned about the different types of essays such as descriptive, narrative, process, cause and effect and argumentative essay. I have been a student at Milwaukee Area Technical College for 1 semester, and over the course of my enrollment I have grown and learned more that I knew prior to attending this writing course. Participating in this writing class has taught me so much more than stuff about literature and language, it has taught me another way of expressing myself. I have learned here how to write and express myself, how to think for myself, and how to find the answers to the things that I don 't know. Most importantly I have learned how important technique, outlines and organization are. My goal in this paper is to inform writers about how my writing skills have improved.
Within the past eight weeks, I have realized my strengths and weaknesses within the writing process. I have realized that I do not utilize the first step within the writing process of prewriting. However, for the drafting, revising, and polishing steps of the writing process, I am very familiar and use additional resources to strengthen the writing assignment. I create multiple drafts, which includes revising and polishing in each step. Therefore, I use all three of these steps in multiple drafts as I reach the final product for
In the beginning of the term I was assigned an essay that described me as a writer and thinker. With this essay being my first assignment, I was quite stressed with the feeling of failure. After this assignment I learned the importance of the drafting system. After my paper was graded I received it back and noticed multiple mistakes. This was the first step I practiced improving. Writing multiple drafts helped me analysis the material I wrote from another point of view. For example, I was able to eliminate sections that were unrelated from the main point. Building my vocabulary up another step I had focus as a writer and thinker. I used a combination between the dictionary and thesaurus to help me increase my vocabulary. Overtime with experience, I saw improvements in all of these categories that I was struggling
From elementary school to high school, I was taught that my writing had to be structured and follow strict criteria. After I arrived in Mr. Mukherjee’s ENG 102 class, I was given the opportunity to express my creative freedom through words and graphical pictures. It can often be difficult and challenging to improve upon my own writing abilities unless motived with an idea in mind. When looking back on my time at ASU, I thought about the goals that I wanted to address for myself and the course goals that my instructor had set for the class. These goals include ones that I had accomplished to the best of my ability and ones that I need to address as well as improve.
A few areas that the writing specialist pointed out in which I need to review and refresh. 1. Fully
In my first “Who I am as a Writer” paper I stated how one of the areas that I needed to improve was writing. I went into more depth talking about how my writing is not descriptive enough and how I cannot grab the reader's attention. Even though I still need to continue making improvements, I have gotten better in both of these aspects. Compared to my papers in high school my introduction paragraphs have improved.
Next, I need to avoid redundancy. I tend to repeat myself in paragraphs. I need to make my sentences shorter (Jamieson, 2010). It seems that I need to take words from my writing. For example, instead of saying she is the person who did something, I should only say she. I understand some phrases should not change. For example, “new beginning, never before, or joined together” (Jamieson, 2010).
In my future writing, I can improve by focusing on the areas that have been brought to my attention, such as fragmented sentence structures, capitalization, punctuation, and MLA formatting mistakes. I hope to enhance my writing skills through better planning, drafting, proofreading, and revising. I can become a better writer by building upon my current writing abilities and paying more attention to my
Throughout the course of freshmen year I have developed different skills and opinions on writing. I feel I have created a more mature style of writing and a better understanding of literature. I have changed my view of writing over this semester and acquired a strong liking for it. The importance of writing has become more visible throughout the past few months. Writing is crucial in many aspects of a person’s life. I have grown to be a more powerful and well built writer throughout this course.
Refining my writing skills is essential at school, work and socially. Continuing to improve my writing skills is currently essential at school because I have to write a lot of research papers which require writing a report on the finding(s). (Citation need it) Improving my writing skills will help me at work to start composing professional e-mails instead of writing a short message on a sticky note or verbally. Socially improving my writing skills will help me immensely because I foresee myself putting together material for a community event and I would like to portray the written information accurately. (citation need it)
One of the four WPA outcome goals of English 101 is to develop my personal writing process. I would like to begin this improvement through a chronological inspection of my current process.
Every writer experiences the daunting task of writing, revising, perfecting, and completing a paper, essay, or book at some point in life. Whether it is for school or a profession, writing and revising papers will always be a part of life. While writing and revising multiple papers for Written Communications, I learned a lot about my writing style, technique, and revision process. Through complicated steps, I performed both global and local revisions in order to increase the clarity of paper, erase all sentence-level confusions, perfect my ideas, and organize my thoughts into a coherent, unified argument.
Although my writing has made some good progress during the course of this semester, I still some things I need to learn in order to keep improving my writing. Grammar, writing in an active voice, and building my rewrite skills are three examples of skills I need to build upon to continue to improve me writing.
Over the course of this past semester, my ability to write has improved tremendously. Prior to undertaking this course, my expertise in writing was not as fine-tuned as it should have been. I had never previously been enrolled in a class specifically tailored to writing-- which was quite clear. Upon reading my past works, it becomes apparent that my writing style consisted of fluff, small words, and inconsistently structured sentences. These problems have, for the most part, been remedied with the coursework I have tackled in College Writing. Rather than long, drawn out papers that take an eternity to reach the primary point, my recent work is much nicer in terms of composition and grammar. I credit these improvements to the three primary
Writers need to have a multitude of skills when they write. These skills make any form of writing better than it would have been. Over time I have obtained many writing skills. All of which have been completely indispensable. If I had not learned these skills; my writing would not be nearly as good or productive as it is. Over this semester I have learned many skills that have made me a better writer.