Help me make this story more awesome... Please Don't make it longer than the original. "There was a man who treated his wife and son poorly; the little boy was afraid of his father. 'Stop screaming at him,' his wife told him. 'I do what I want,' answered the father and began laughing. The next day, the woman made dinner. 'The food is so tasty,' said the boy. The father became angry and replied, 'This is disgusting, you don't know how to cook,' then he got up from the table and left. Many years passed and the boy grew up and started working. One evening, the father started shouting again. 'Son, give me all your money, I need it.' 'He won't give you anything,' replied the mother. The father became very angry. Suddenly, the boy stood up and stood in front of his mother. 'We are leaving,' he said. The father started laughing. 'Mom, follow me,' the mother was surprised. 'You are not going anywhere,' said the father. 'I don't have to ask you for anything,' replied the son. The mother started to cry and hugged her son. The boy then said, 'You protected me when I was a child, and now I will protect you."

Help me make this story more awesome... Please Don't make it longer than the original. "There was a man who treated his wife and son poorly; the little boy was afraid of his father. 'Stop screaming at him,' his wife told him. 'I do what I want,' answered the father and began laughing. The next day, the woman made dinner. 'The food is so tasty,' said the boy. The father became angry and replied, 'This is disgusting, you don't know how to cook,' then he got up from the table and left. Many years passed and the boy grew up and started working. One evening, the father started shouting again. 'Son, give me all your money, I need it.' 'He won't give you anything,' replied the mother. The father became very angry. Suddenly, the boy stood up and stood in front of his mother. 'We are leaving,' he said. The father started laughing. 'Mom, follow me,' the mother was surprised. 'You are not going anywhere,' said the father. 'I don't have to ask you for anything,' replied the son. The mother started to cry and hugged her son. The boy then said, 'You protected me when I was a child, and now I will protect you."