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Analysis Of The Article 'How Winning Leads To Cheating'

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The moment when we cheat on someone or something that we loved will be one of the greatest regret in our life. In the article, “How Winning Leads to Cheating”, by Jordana Capelewicz talks about the ideas and interesting facts on cheating. Capelewicz’s ideas and facts really convince me of cheating was bad, and I felt bad for cheating in a competition in the past. She stated that people tend to cheat in a competition, and there are many research proves that the competitors will think he or she is better than anyone else by winning and was successful despite cheating. In the research, the author plays a game with different varieties of people to analysis and determine in her research to see the chance of cheating. On the other hand, Simon Malik’s article “National Corruption Breeds Personal Dishonesty”, talk about how people in poor and corrupt countries will cheat more than rich …show more content…

This point did not convince me, and I felt like this evidence is not reasonable enough to persuade me. In Malik’s research, he tries to find out how people in corrupt country can influence people to cheat in a variety of people in different country to participate in a game. Although Malik performed a lot of tests, but the hypothesis were poorly run and not logical enough. Capelewicz’s article really assured me of facts with cheating, and it is really persuasive because she makes logical sense, offers strong evidence, and credibility.

Logical sense is one of the most important factors to convince readers to believe the article or research were reliable. In “How Winning Leads to Cheating” by Jordana Capelewicz, her example of winning in competition as her topic, and the evidence allows the readers to relate to her idea. In the article,

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