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Two Poems About City Life by Liz Lochead

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Two poems about city life by Liz Lochead

Liz Lochead has written two poems about city life, one being Laundrette which is set in an area of Bristol which is full of bedsits, meant for students just renting. The other poem is George Square which is set in the business district in Glasgow. As the first poem mentioned, Laundrette has a subtle start as it says ‘We sit nebulous in steam’ (nebulous meaning hazy or vague). You could almost have a debate on all the possible places that you ‘sit nebulous in steam’. Through the whole of laundrette it never uses the word laundrette except of course in the title. Quite on the opposite, George Square starts off straight and plain by saying ‘George Square’. This throws the location to a square in a …show more content…

When saying ‘sitting separate’ the poet puts ‘sitting’ and ‘separate’ on different lines to emphasise the importance of the words being separate. Straight after that she puts ‘close together’ on the same line to say that they’re close together.
Both poems have metaphors in, George Square uses ‘incurable as cancer’ as quite a shocking metaphor to describe how we can’t get rid of flowers and weeds in the city no matter how hard we try.
Laundrette has a few more metaphors. It has ‘our eyes are riveted’ to describe how we just stand or sit and stare intently at the washing machine as if were expecting something to happen to our clothes. Another metaphor is ‘the dark shoves one man in’ which uses personification to show how someone, randomly wandering around comes into the laundrette to get away from the dark.
A good metaphor is ‘tee shirts skinned from her wriggling son’ meaning how a mother had too pull the tee shirts off her son who was probably screaming, shouting and trying to get away. One metaphor, talking about the same person is ‘she sees a kaleidoscope’ saying about how all the multicoloured clothes go whirring around the washing machine very much like a kaleidoscope.
‘Half lost, his small possessions swim’ describes how there is a ‘dour’ man with hardly any clothes at all to wash so the washing machine isn’t full, creating the image of his clothes swimming around in all the masses of water looking ‘half lost’. The last metaphor is a rather long one, still

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