Exercise 13.1 and Thinking Critically
For each passage, I placed the preceding and following sentences along with the sentence with quotation. The underline sentence is cited work, and I corrected the quotes with errors.
Example 1:
Barrier devices are spermicides, sponges, diaphragm and cervical caps, sponges and male and female condoms. These are known as “the sperm blockers,” because they physically block the sperm from the eggs (Birth Control, 2015-2017). Another method is hormonal, which is the most common technique and includes the pill, shot, patch, and ring.
In the first example, I used a quoted term used by Teen Source. The quote was to give more emphasis on the specific method of contraception. Previously in the paragraph, I introduce the source, however I didn’t not
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Teen Source interpreters the methods as “the sperm blockers,” because they physically block the sperm from the eggs (Birth Control, 2015-2017). Another method is hormonal, which is the most common technique and includes the pill, shot, patch, and ring.
Example 2:
Besides the operations, all types of birth control are not entirely guaranteed to prevent conception or STDs. Teen Source states, “The only 100% effective method of birth control is abstinence” (Birth Control, 2015-2017). In addition, citizens debate whether providing contraception to public school or health clinics encourage sex throughout the community. Although, I addressed the same source with a preceding quote, I only used the cite a minimal amount. Thus, my paper was not crowed with only summaries, paraphrases and quotes, but also my own writing and thoughts. The quote from Teen Source was the written suitably, and had the correct characteristics. It possessed an introduction, and an accurate signal verb. It concluded one topic profoundly to rouse readers to continue to be engaged with the remaining essay.
Example
Condoms are categories into two type one is male type condom and one is female type condom. Male type condom can by many material such as latex, plastic and animal membrane. As the function is just to act as a wrapper to stop the semen enter to the vagina. The advantages are easy to use and getting protection against sexually infection. The disadvantage is it may tear or break without improper use. For female condom, it is an internal use condom as the condom needed to put inside the vagina with a device to hold the place. The advantage is protected form HIV infection and disadvantage is it very hard to put the condom correctly. For barrier birth control method also have spermicide, diaphragm, and sterilization. Spermicide is a gel type barrier for birth control, as it available in several forms for personal convenience and disadvantage is it may be difficult to use because it have to apply immediately before intercourse. Then, diaphragm is a domed-shape rubber cup that for female user only and there is having the spermicidal jelly inside the dome. The jelly is to kill the sperm cells. The advantage is it can be keep for two or three months if clean and stored properly and disadvantage is required to go to clinic or physician for the fitting. Sterilization is the way that can be done by male or female as it only needed to cut the tube lead to the scrotum and join to urethra (vasectomy), as
plays an important role in providing woman with an affordable birth control.(overview pg.2) We depend on our insurance to pay for our health necessities. As a result unplanned pregnancy cost the american public roughly $9 billion each year.(pg.9 should teens have access to BC) Although many forms of birth control are available, such as condoms which are easily to attain. Statistics show that many teens who are sexually active do not use contraceptives of any kind.(pg.9 should teens have access to BC) Among these are the incidence of miscarriages, and abortions.(pg.8 should teens have access to BC) Preventing pregnancy is affordable, but is also a
Oral contraceptive has been a controversial topic for years. Oral contraceptives are a common form of birth control. Birth control is used to prevent pregnancy by blocking a male’s sperm from fertilizing a female’s egg. Women take birth control to prevent pregnancy. Also, teen women can prevent unwanted pregnancies by having access to over the counter birth control pills. Birth control pills should be available without a prescription.
The quotation’s in this essay were very impressive and supported the arguments nicely. However, the citations were somewhat incorrect in terms of the end notes and work cited. In paragraph
Since 1899, the array of male birth control options had been limited to Vasectomies, abstinence, withdrawal, or condoms. The method of withdrawal has a low success rate, condoms are seen as uncomfortable during sex, and vasectomies are too permanent. Withdrawal and abstinence are the oldest forms of male contraceptives and before female birth control and condoms, the only form of contraceptive. Vasectimes are effective at stoping sperm form leaving the testical, but the procedure is done by surgery and is permanent. In contrast to the hundreds of flexible and effective birth control for women, males options are meager at at best. The ideal birth control for both genders involves a long lasting contraceptive, minimal to no side effects, and
In addition, there are many types of birth control and some are more effective than others. The pill is 99.9 percent effective in preventing pregnancies. Birth control is not only effective in preventing pregnancy, but also has its own advantages such as significant relief to women with painful menstrual cramps, decreases the risk of anemia, reduces acne, and much more. If birth control has a near perfect success rate, there is no harm in a teen’s ability to obtain birth control pills, but rather benefits to it.
Who in here has heard of or even know what the term birth control is? According to medicinenet.com, birth control is the use of any practices, methods, or devices to prevent pregnancy from occuring in sexually active women. Today, I will be talking about a couple of methods of birth control which include: the pill, the patch, and the implant. Another method I will be talking to you about isn’t always considered a form of birth control, but it actually is; condoms. My goal today is to not only inform you of the many birth controls but to also encourage you to look at the pros and the cons of every method if you are using contraception. Birth control is a very broad topic with many alternatives which can impact your lifestyle in many ways, therefore you should consider these alternatives before applying any form of contraceptive into your body and find the method that works best for you.
8. When using direct quotations in your writing, which of the following should be placed outside the set of
Aside from an opening sentence approximately adjusted from the first and revamped all the more basically, this whole entry is taken practically word-for-word from the source. The couple of little adjustments of the source don't alleviate the essayist of the obligation to credit these words to their unique writer, Alvin Kernan. A section from a source might be worth citing finally on the off chance that it makes a point unequivocally or exquisitely. In such cases, duplicate the section precisely, put it in quotes, and refer to the
In chapter 5, I learned about different ways of birth control. For males there are condoms for a barrier method. While for women, they have many barrier the methods and birth control pills. Male condoms fit over the penis, while the women condoms are single-use nitrile sheath for internal use during vaginal intercouse. Both condoms have options to use spermicides which is a substance that kills the sperm. Aside from condoms women have diaphragm, which is a latex, cup-shape that blocks access to the uterus. If the device is left more than 48 hours the women can get toxic shock syndrome which is when a specific bacterial toxins multiply and spread in the bloodstream. There are also oral contraceptives which are pills that contain hormones that
Another effective form of birth control is a device called the diaphragm. It is considered to be a barrier method because it prevents sperm from entering the uterus through the cervix. This birth control option as been around for many years. “The device is a soft latex or silicone dome with a flexible rim that is placed in the vagina to cover the cervix” (Hawkins, Roberto-Nichols and Stanley-Haney, 2016. Pg. 60). A diaphragm cannot be bought over the counter, the patient must go to their provider to be properly sized and fitted. A provider will select a diaphragm based on a patient’s vaginal muscle tone and the anatomic shape of their vagina and pubic bone (Carcio and Secor, 2015). Diaphragm range in sizes from 50 to 105 mm in diameter, but
There are many types of birth control including condoms, IUDs, birth control pills, vasectomy, etc. Condoms are one of the most popular forms of birth control. They come in many shapes and sizes, with and without lube.They slip over the penis to prevent pregnancy and lower the risk of STIs by keeping sperm inside of the condom and not in your vagina. An IUD (intrauterine device) is a small t-shaped device that is inserted in your uterus by your doctor. It is plastic and wrapped in copper or contains hormones. There is a plastic string tied to the of the IUD that hangs down from the cervix into the vagina. You can check that the IUD is in place by feeling for this string. The string is also used by your doctor to remove the IUD. There are two types of IUDs, hormonal and copper IUD. The hormonal IUD prevents fertilization by damaging or killing the sperm and making the mucus in the cervix big and gooey. It keeps the lining of the uterus from growing very thick. That makes the lining a very poor place for a fertilized egg to implant and grown. The hormones in this IUD stops the cramping and
Before we dive in we must ask ourselves, what is birth control? What is the difference between it and contraception? Well, the only difference is what the common belief in society is, of each. Society commonly thinks that birth control is a tiny pill that takes care of your own or someone else’s pregnancy worries. This is true, but it is only a type of birth control. Also, in false thinking, many individuals believe contraception is a fancy word for condoms. As with the pill condoms are only a type of contraceptive. Society only has a small spectrum of what contraceptive and birth control is. In reality, they are definitely the same. By definition, birth control is contraception; an online dictionary states that it is “the deliberate prevention of conception or impregnation” (MerriamWebster.org). There are many forms of contraception. It is a major contributor to why our population is limited to 7.4 billion people (Current World Population). If you are ever considering a contraception method the Intrauterine device, especially the ParaGard, will be a dependable option to keep the population
The first method is abstinence or no sex play, this will keep sperm from joining egg. This method is difficult for many people because they have a hard time going without sex for long periods of time and they forget to protect themselves when they stop abstaining. The outercourse method means you will have sex play without vaginal intercourse. This is also difficult for many people and they sometimes forget to protect themselves. The most popular form of birth control in the U.S. among married couples over the age of 30 is surgical sterilization. In the woman this is done by severing and sealing off the Fallopian tubes. The tubes that carry the egg from the ovary to the uterus. The operation is called a tubal ligation. In the male, sterilization is accomplished by severing the two vas deferens. The tubes that carry sperm from the testes to the penis. This procedure is called a vasectomy. Surgical sterilization is relatively easy to accomplish for either sex and is virtually free of known side effects, it is also 100 percent effective. It should be considered a permanent method of birth control. There are several chemical methods of birth control on the market. Oral contraceptives or the pill, are chemicals that work by altering a woman's normal hormonal patterns so that ovulation does not occur. Their introduction in the late 1950's revolutionized birth control. The pill is nearly 100 percent effective when taken according to directions. Some risks do
Condoms, as defined by Delvin (2012), are “sheathes that trap the sperm when a man climaxes.” Crall (1999) explains the meaning of a contraceptive as “a method, device or pharmaceutical drug that prevents pregnancy.” Both are used in reducing the chances of pregnancy. Young people today especially high